Titan's Advertisement

PetrolHeaD

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hehehe not bad stan,

who did the copywriting? you or hired someone?


would suggest coming up with a more catchy and simpler slogan/copywrite though
 

Battousai

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Seeing as yours is a rather *expensive* product, I would suggest that you need a more informative ad. This time can let it slide lar cos it was accompanied by that write-up. But next time, I think you need to pack it with more info.
 

PetrolHeaD

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id suggest something like:

at the top: we dont just sell suspension,
then lower down in bold or something to make it stand out: we sell SOLUTIONS

like what u got now...but shorten it la :)


copywrite with phrases like:

fully customized solutions for your car's handling needs,
extremely robust construction.

i would suggest including something about the inverted strut design ala wrc etc. cuz that (for me anyway) was a huge selling point.
nothing too technical la, something simple enough for the average car nut to understand.


maybe shorten the slogan a bit, make it more catchy:

my suggestion: we work hard so that you may drive hard.

just shootin out ideas...if they're lame tell me so ill stay away from advertising :lol:
 

PetrolHeaD

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i like that better...more to the point and brief
 

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