id suggest something like:
at the top: we dont just sell suspension,
then lower down in bold or something to make it stand out: we sell SOLUTIONS
like what u got now...but shorten it la :)
copywrite with phrases like:
fully customized solutions for your car's handling needs,
extremely robust construction.
i would suggest including something about the inverted strut design ala wrc etc. cuz that (for me anyway) was a huge selling point.
nothing too technical la, something simple enough for the average car nut to understand.
maybe shorten the slogan a bit, make it more catchy:
my suggestion: we work hard so that you may drive hard.
just shootin out ideas...if they're lame tell me so ill stay away from advertising :lol:
